Orson Scott Card, Empire, Ender’s Game, Authorship and Extremism
Nov 30
The latest form Orson Scott Card is getting quite a bit of well deserved mockery from the liberal blogosphere and quite a bit of understandable praise form the right. The book, a story about a leftist Army taking over New York City and precipitating a civil war, is badly written right wing wish fulfillment. In appears to contain every lazy stereotype and fantasy the more deranged on the right harbor about their neighbors on the left. The fact that Instapundit loves it is telling. Brad and Roy have the best takes, as usual, but I have seen more than a few references to the rumor that Card didn’t write his best novel, Ender’s Game. I don’t buy it: Card has always had streak of militarism and “kill em all and let God sort em out” in his writing, even in Ender’s Game.
The best argument for Card not having written Ender’s Game is just how much better it is than almost anything Card has written since. In fact, Card’s technical writing ability seems to have steadily declined. Just take this awful, awful passage from his new book:
You look pissed off,” said Malich.
“Yeah,” said Cole. “The terrorists are crazy and scary, but what really pisses me off is knowing that this will make a whole bunch of European intellectuals very happy.”
“They won’t be so happy when they see where it leads. They’ve already forgotten Sarajevo and the killing fields of Flanders.”
“I bet they’re already ‘advising’ Americans that this is where our military ‘aggression’ inevitably leads, so we should take this as a sign that we need to change our policies and retreat from the world.”
“And maybe we will,” said Malich. “A lot of Americans would love to slam the doors shut and let the rest of the world go hang.”
“And if we did,” said Cole, “who would save Europe then? How long before they find out that negotiations only work if the other guy is scared of the consequences of not negotiating? Everybody hates America till they need us to liberate them.”
“You’re forgetting that nobody cares what Europeans think except a handful of American intellectuals who are every bit as anti-American as the French,” said Malich.
This is representative: chapter two is nothing more than an extended Mary Sue sequence where Card’s alter ego really sticks it to all those liberal, American hating hoity-toity professors. The whole thing almost makes me pity Card. Almost. There is nothing remotely that bad in Ender’s Game. But I don’t take that as evidence for the contention that Card didn’t write Ender’s Game In fact, the sample chapters actually work to tie Empire back to his first work.
Put aside for the moment the stale dialogue, the horrible clichés, and the fantasy about Europeans and “anti-American” liberals. This conversation happens literally a few minutes after a terrorist attack kills most members of the Executive — including the President and the Vice President — and a few moments after the two men involved in this had decided that the Army, and perhaps they themselves, were going to be framed for the attack. And yet what really makes them mad is the fact that European intellectuals will think that this proves they are right about the value of military might in the world. Real people don’t act like this. Real people would be worried about their country, about the possibility of more attacks, about the safety of their friends and family, about the possibility that they were going to be framed for the greatest terrorist attack in the country’s history, about what they should be doing right now to help put things back together again. But Card hasn’t written real people; he has written talking point spewing robots. And Empire is not a real story, it is a polemic to the joys of Might:
“Nothing,” said Reuben immediately. “They respect us now because we have a dangerous military. They adopt our culture because we’re rich. If we were poor and unarmed, they’d peel off American culture like a snake shedding its skin.”
“Yes!” said Torrent. The other students registered as much surprise as Reuben felt, though Reuben did not let it show. Torrent agreed with the soldier?
Remember that — there is nothing good or valuable in American ideals or culture. They only thing that keeps America from being ignored is the power of her military. Might is right, Might is good, Might is all. It is a similar message to at least one of the themes that runs through Ender’s Game.
As a brief synopsis of the relevant portions of Ender’s Game:(and apologies for the lack of quotes — I don’t have the text in front of me) Ender is a child the military raises to be the ultimate strategists and battlefield commander and thus lead the Earth to victory over its alien enemies. Ender accomplishes this by committing genocide on the aliens, genocide that the military has maneuvered him into committing. Before that, however, the military manipulates Ender’s life so that he needlessly kills two boys (though Ender doesn’t know they are dead until long after the fact) and that he is abused and oppressed by others in order to impress upon him the fact that only overwhelming violence is the answer. When Ender is given his first student command, Ender treats his best subordinate in the same fashion in order to get similar results. At no point is any of this played as even morally ambiguous: the torture of Ender is justified, as are the deaths, as is Ender’s own torment of his subordinate as Good and Right and Necessary. Ender is explicitly forgiven his actions several time sin the text — even the genocide, even the murder of one boy where he clearly went farther than was required to take himself out of danger — in part because he was manipulated, but in part because overwhelming, destructive violence is a necessary part of human and human/alien relations. Even the men who manipulated Ender into genocide and murder are exonerated both by the text and the courts of Earth. Might is right, Might is good, even if Might is not yet all. There are other themes in the book, and the question of genocide is dealt with with more complexity than it might seem from this summary, but the
A common thread runs through Ender’s Game and Empire, then, even if it is much more developed in Empire. And that last is the primary difference: Ender’s Game is a story; Empire is not. Ender’s Game tries to be a good story; that is, it tries to build realistic characters and have them react realistically to the situations they find themselves in. It attempts to mirror how real humans behave because it is, like all good stories, interested in telling us something about people. Empire does not have real characters because it is not interested in telling us a story. It is interested in making a political point and it will make that point, realism,. believability, character be damned. The difference between Empire and Ender’s Game are not the result of different authors. They are the results of differences in authorial intent.
Okay, so this is OSC’s entry into neo-con porn, a badly written book that amounts to nothing more than material for the 101st Keyboarders to wank off to. Why spend so much time on it, aside from the unintentionally hilarious prose? Because I believe the distance between Ender’s Game and Empire illustrates one of Dave Neiwart’s points: extremism can be mainstreamed.
In the late eighties, Orson Card was a writer with authoritarian leanings who wrote decent stories. Then came sixteen years of Rush Limbaugh and his ilk’s demonization of the left wing. That demonization only increased after 9/11, turning in some cases to explicitly eliminiationist rhetoric; Dave’s site has the details. And at the end of the time, Orson Card has morphed into full blown right wing lunatic who writes a political polemic flecked with spittle and pours bile on leftists of all stripes. Now, a person’s growth is never as simple as A caused B, and obviously I am not privy to what goes on in Card’s head. But the similarities are so striking as to be compelling. Leftists, in the world of Limbaugh and Coulter and Malkin, are vile things: anti-Military, closed-minded, smug, superior, elitist, anti-American, violent, incapable of reasoned though, practically traitors. Leftists, in Empire, are vile things: anti-Military, closed-minded, smug, superior, elitist, anti-American, violent, incapable of reasoned though, actually traitors. America, in the world of Limbaugh and Coulter and Malkin, is always right (even when it acts as an Empire it’s not really acting as an Empire) and its correct course of action is always to show the world who is boss. America, in Empire, is always right (even when it acts as an Empire it’s not really acting as an Empire) and its correct course of action is always to show the world who is boss.
In just five short chapters, Empire contains almost every vicious strawmen that people like Limbaugh have constructed to represent the Left in their minds and the minds of their followers. Ender’s Game had none that I can think of, and was only tentatively authoritarian. It is possible, of course, that Card came to his conclusions about liberals years after that Limbaugh and his imitators built strawmen that look precisely like those conclusions. But forgive me if I think that the road from Ender’s Game to Empire went through the cesspool that is the world of Limbaugh and Coulter and Malkin.
#1 by William K. Wolfrum at November 30th, 2006
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I enjoyed Ender’s Game quite a bit, though it declined rapidly as he serialized it.
What’s odd is that Card has obviously made the conscious decision that he’d rather be Bill O’Reilly that Isaac Asimov. Or Ben Bova at very least.
–WKW
#2 by Paul Tomblin at November 30th, 2006
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Real people don’t act like this. Real people would be worried about their country, about the possibility of more attacks, about the safety of their friends and family, about the possibility that they were going to be framed for the greatest terrorist attack in the country’s history, about what they should be doing right now to help put things back together again.
And about how “My Pet Goat” comes out. Don’t forget that.
#3 by Fred at November 30th, 2006
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It’s just a book of fiction. Get over it. Good grief!
#4 by Tim Cooper at November 30th, 2006
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Yeah, I’m not sure what happened to Orson. When writing in the realm of science fiction he had good stories, and had a basically tolerant viewpoint. Ever since he decided to become a Tom Clancy wanna-be, he’s really gone downhill. Which is really dissapointing that even ten years ago he was writing really good stuff.
#5 by Lynne at November 30th, 2006
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An old children’s rhyme says, “There was a little girl who had a little curl, right in the middle of her forehead. When she was good, she was very, very good! And, when she was bad, she was horrid.”
Unfortunately, this describes Orson Scott Card. His good works are brilliant. But, his bad work stinks. And, sometimes, something wonderful degenerates into something awful, like his Tales of Alvin Maker series, where the first book was great, the second very good, the third good and all the rest just plain terrible.
Personally, I don’t sweat his politics. I just wished the quality of his writing was consistent.
#6 by Mirele at December 2nd, 2006
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Orson Scott Card used to be a lot cooler. Up until about 1990, he used to go to science fiction conventions and hold “Secular Humanist Revivals.” By all accounts, they were great fun.
Around 1990, something happened. Card wrote an essay for a Mormon literary magazine called “The Hypocrites of Homosexuality,” an anti-gay screed that aroused the ire of a lot of people. Since then, he’s been as reliably right-wing as Rush Limbaugh. No more Secular Humanist Revivals.
Even though I was never a fan of Card’s books (and in fact was annoyed at him for basically stealing the Joseph Smith story for the Alvin Maker series, as well as the Book of Mormon for the Homecoming series), I was unhappy that Card not only had to lean right, but that he’s leaning so far right he’s about to touch the floor. What a waste.
#7 by Fred at December 2nd, 2006
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“Card wrote an essay for a Mormon literary magazine called “The Hypocrites of Homosexuality,” an anti-gay screed that aroused the ire of a lot of people. Since then, he’s been as reliably right-wing as Rush Limbaugh. No more Secular Humanist Revivals.”
Sounds good.
#8 by David at December 2nd, 2006
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I disagree with the claim that overwhelming force is unambiguous in Ender’s Game — I thought a significant point of the book was that Ender realized the genocide was wrong before the rest of the culture had dealt with it. Isn’t that the point of the concluding chapters, as well as the entire follow-up novel “Speaker for the Dead”? The philosophy that power is all that matters was the driving force for the Peter character, but Ender only accepted it out of despair, and I didn’t think this was presented as a “good thing.” (This may have changed in his more recent, lower-quality sequels… I stopped reading after “Ender’s Shadow.”)
The “power is everything” concept does seem like a sort of common thread between Ender’s Game and Empire, but while Card’s books always had a sort of intolerant philosophy, in his earlier years his distinction between right and wrong was less militant and at least a little more subtle. Speaker and Xenocide had genuine ethical dilemmas, and his answers weren’t so simplistic as they seem to have become in the intervening years. A pity…
#9 by Number9 at December 11th, 2006
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Kevin, did you read more than two chapters of Empire?
#10 by Kevin at December 12th, 2006
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Yeah, I read all of the free chapters, five, I believe. It doesn’t get better.
#11 by MoshMasterD at December 18th, 2006
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It seems to me that you dwell on the first 4 or 5 chapters of the book without and consideration with the rest of the book. You might be surprised with the ending.
#12 by Fidus at January 6th, 2007
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If you read into Ender a “conservative” agenda, you not only missed the point, you have let your liberalism overcome your appreciation of irony. Ender is not the epitome of violent human nature; he is rather an innocent whose own instinct for self- and species- survival saves both himself and his species. Take the time to read “Ender’s Shadow” and discover Bean, who is anything but an innocent. It is ORC’s response to those of you who think that the series is a science fiction story.
Just wait for Bean’s observation, after he helps Ender destroy the alien invader, that the “buggers had no idea what a monstrous species we are” in our inherently bi-polar nature of self-preservation and self-sacrifice.
#13 by Adam at January 10th, 2007
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The keystone problem to the whole argument of your article is that Card has been and continues to be a registered Democrat. Though his book may detail a fantastic senario of a leftist led military take over it is certainly not written by a conservative fanatic.
#14 by Graham at January 11th, 2007
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This article is obviously writen by someone who is not very familiar with Card’s work. Many of the quotes used are ironic statements. In fact in the afterward to “Empire” Card states that he is a moderate. The entire book is about a worst case scenario for the purpose of having radicals, in both the republicans and the democrats, stop and think about the stupid things they’re saying.
#15 by tim at January 14th, 2007
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thank you to every sane person here who bothered to actually pay attention to the point of the book as well as the fact that it was actually good. The author of is essay is at least as bad as Rush Limbaugh when he went off at the mere suggestion that the 2000 elctions were rigged, then went to take the entire statement out of context. Question for all of you: are extremists such as Rush or Kevin good for anything?
#16 by Michael at January 25th, 2007
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Dude,
You reviewed a book without ACTUALLY READING IT?
What intellectual shammery. The book, in fact, does get much more complex than one (or, more accurately, you) might imagine. You might want to read the afterword posted on Hatrack River (www.hatrack.com), Scott’s home page.
As far as his social/political beliefs making him a “Coultbaugh Conservative”, Scott follows his faith on beliefs about homosexuality’s position in the world. He has stated that it is not the state of being homosexual that bothers him — simply the way it is manifested in current society. He views the war in Iraq and Afghanistan and on Terra as necessary to the world’s safety. As such, his “litmus test” for supporting policy and candidates is their support of the war. His reasoning is generally well thought-out and organized and presented in much clearer fashion that pundits from either side of the chasm.
As far as the writing of his books — he’s not Vonnegut, he’s not Pynchon. He doesn’t want to be. He wants to write books in plain, easy-to-read language. This is because he is primarily interested in telling stories, not writing novels.
Please, Kevin, do your intellectual integrity a favor and read the novel cover-to-cover before you review it.
M
#17 by Kevin at January 25th, 2007
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Michael
No, I didn’t review the book. I th large portion of the book publicly available and another text to discuss the notion that Card did not write his first large success. They are not the same thing. I would have thought that a person of your towering intellectual capabilities would have noticed that.
As for Card’s positions, sorry, but his homophobia is both out-sized, mean spirited, not supported by standard Christian texts (its possible that the Book of Mormon is more homophobic than the Bible — I haven’t read much of it) and condescending. Car dis fine with homos as long as they stay in the closets. Oh, how generous of him.
As for his writing, the writing on display in his current book is, as I pointed out with examples, both atrocious and displays cartoonish reasoning and the grossest kind of stereotyping. It fails on aolmost any level you wish to discuss.
#18 by Michael at January 26th, 2007
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you:
“The book, a story about a leftist Army taking over New York City and precipitating a civil war, is badly written right wing wish fulfillment. In appears to contain every lazy stereotype and fantasy the more deranged on the right harbor about their neighbors on the left.”
and: “In just five short chapters. . .”
You don’t say: “I read the five chapter, free introduction published at hatrack.com and based my assumptions on that. . .”
And since you don’t, it appears that you have simply reviewed a fairly short book.
M
#19 by martin at February 26th, 2007
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Wow. The vehemence that comes out when the tables are turned.
Take any movie or TV show out there. Republicans or conservatives are nearly always ridiculed and portrayed as stupid, foolish, power hungry, etc. These are always the ‘bad guys’. George Bush is likened to Hitler. We have lost the ability to speak in terms of anything but extremes. It’s like the child that calls everything he likes ‘awesome!’. But that is our level of discourse these days. And so Orson Scott Card writes a book in which the extreme left is the villan and of course he’s mocked and spit upon as a ‘right wing lunatic’.
Put it this way, were the same book written with exact opposite protagonist and antagonist, we would be hearing about how the book is ’sobering’ and ‘thought-provoking’.
Frankly, it’s just plain refreshing.
#20 by Spencer at March 4th, 2007
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well, first off, i find it rather stupid of you to bash things that you haven’t even read completely, things change from the first page of a book to the last page of the book, otherwise who would ever read a book? also, you seem rather stupid by making spelling mistakes when bashing a book, english professor, writer, and etc. seriously, don’t bash things you’ve never looked into completely, i also think it’s rather stupid that you said something about the Book of Mormon when you’ve never even read the whole thing. “As for Card’s positions, sorry, but his homophobia is both out-sized, mean spirited, not supported by standard Christian texts” - kevin. sorry say bud, but his positions are supported by Christian texts, if you fail to see connections here and there in his writing, you’re dumb. you’ll probably tell me i’m stupid or something after i post this, but hey.. i’m 15 heh, what do i know, right?
#21 by A Shaffer at March 4th, 2007
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I finished reading empire less than two hours ago. It was a crap read. I read Ender’s Game a few years ago and really enjoyed it. I then read a number of other OSC books. Some were OK. None were great. Some were terrible. As commented on here before the Alvin Maker series devolved into silliness. Empire is very likely the last OSC book I will bother with.
It was obvious throughout the read that Orson Scott Card gets his news from the Fox network and and I can hazard a guess as to his talk radio choices. He repeatedly tries to make the point that people on both sides of the political spectrum demonize the other. And yet the only characters he bothers to fill in beyond the merest sketch are quite right wing while his so called “Progressive” characters are left wing cartoons.
The most disturbing aspect for me though was his ham handed dialogue between his “heroic” protaganists after the President, VP and Secretary of Defense are killed with another 200 people in washington. There is no real grief or outrage. Nothing like what we experienced here in NY after 9/11. His characters launch into lame thoughts on the red state/ blue state divide (anybody else tired of this red/blue nonsense). He even has some Americans cheering the death of an elected US president. Utter nonsense.
OSC wrote this book in advance of a video game to be modeled on it and the plot never rises above the thinnest game plot. I have seen a number of games that had tremendously better story lines than this. I also found it telling to read a Wired magazine interview with OSC where he rants about the state of the video game industry, sees little hope for improvement unless maybe his own precious comments might make a difference.
Turns out the guy’s a crackpot.
#22 by Jerid at March 15th, 2007
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So far nobody here seems to have come away from the book with the same interpretation of the plot that I did. Not surprising particularly for those who didn’t read the entire thing… This wasn’t about the extreme right vs. the extreme left. It wasn’t about vilifying the left wing by some right wing sympathizer.
Set aside the fact that the book’s premise was created around a game concept for an American civil war. Set aside that in at least one interview he mentioned that certain aspects that were already to be included in the game he wrote the story to fit. (My guess is the mechs and or the enemy base.)
The story is told from the point of view someone who undoubtedly would be classified as belonging to the right. I for one didn’t see him as a hero. The guy was a pawn. His associates were pawns. The worst part was they knew, or at least deeply suspected, they were pawns. The heroism equated to putting themselves into danger and in trying to discover the motives and identities of those who were manipulating them.
The villain, if you must break the story down to good vs. evil, is more likely Torrent than anyone else. For those searching for a link to Ender’s Game you are looking at the wrong characters. Neither Cole nor Reuben fit the bill. Torrent is an amalgamation of Ender and Peter. He either understands and empathizes with both sides so well that he can relate to anyone like Ender, or he exploits the weaknesses in everyone in order to make the situation as advantageous as possible for himself. That is left a mystery after a solid shove in the darker direction.
The message was closed minds are the easiest to manipulate and extreme polarization provides the perfect situation for exploitation.
#23 by Bruce Josephson at March 20th, 2007
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It is interesting to hear David, who admists he has not read most of a book (and in fact took advantage of a free read), say what it means. Also it is interesting to see someone misconsture a book so much. For the informaiton of those who may be more open-minded, and… than David, it would be useful to quote what Card did write outside of the context of the book, in the afterward,
But any rational observer has to see that the Left and Right in America are screaming the most vile accusations at each other all the time. We are fully polarized — if you accept one idea that sounds like it belongs to either the blue or the red, you are assumed — nay, required — to espouse the entire rest of the package, even though there is no reason why supporting the war against terrorism should imply you’re in favor of banning all abortions and against restricting the availability of firearms; no reason why being in favor of keeping government-imposed limits on the free market should imply you also are in favor of giving legal status to homosexual couples and against building nuclear reactors. These issues are not remotely related, and yet if you hold any of one group’s views, you are hated by the other group as if you believed them all; and if you hold most of one group’s views, but not all, you are treated as if you were a traitor for deviating even slightly from the party line.
It goes deeper than this, however. A good working definition of fanaticism is that you are so convinced of your views and policies that you are sure anyone who opposes them must either be stupid and deceived or have some ulterior motive. We are today a nation where almost everyone in the public eye displays fanaticism with every utterance.
David has produced just this simplistic of an analysis.
To an unbiased observer, Card is criticizing the right as much as the left. BTW, I have not seen any evidence that the right thinks he has written a brilliant criticism of the left. I wonder where David got this from. Or did he simply make it up.
Card later writes:
It has happened to me, repeatedly, from both the Left and the Right. It is never enough to disagree with me — I must be banned from speaking at a particular convention or campus; my writings should be boycotted; anything that will punish me for my noncompliance and, if possible, impoverish me and my family.
I do not think Card is right about the blue and red states being so far apart, but listening to some people here makes me think he is not completely wrong.
I guess I come from a more liberal school than some here. I recall a quote which says:
I do not agree with what you have to say, but I’ll defend to the death your right to say it.
Voltaire
To me this is the epitome of what it means to be a liberal, and I am ashamed of pseudo-liberals who hate anybody who has a different view than they do.
Best Wishes,
Bruce Josephson
#24 by Phil at April 10th, 2007
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I consider Orson a brilliant novelist and hack political analyst. I haven’t enjoyed his work as much lately either because, as noted above, the latter seems to be engulfing the former more and more.
#25 by Understanding at May 15th, 2007
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Hmm , let see he is a fictional writer god forbid him to right fiction … if it had ben the right going all commando and taking over NY, you would have more than likely praised the book. But alas, that was not in this story so OSC is a dumb and awful(er) writer then he was previously.
Honestly, learn to suck up. It it is meant to be a story, not Mein Kampf for OSC.
Show me a series that didn’t start to decline in quality after a few books… Best yet is WOT in my option .. well until his last 1-3 books.. but hey 10ish books i all enjoyed was the best i have seen. Most series are awful after the 3rd book.
I thought most of his popular series and books were ok at best… I personally loved Enchantment. Its New but at the same time not original at all, or is it?
It is just a fun story, it kind of reminds me of a Michael Crichton book.
But in the end why not read it and enjoy it. Its a story not a platform.
#26 by Paul at May 16th, 2007
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Apparently you never read the afterword in the novel. Card specifically states that this book wasn’t choosing sides and that he himself is a moderate. Those seeing one-sided bias in this book are simply letting their own bias for their particular side to get in the way. There is plenty of blame on BOTH sides in this book. I suggest re-reading it with an OPEN mind next time!
#27 by Roy at August 6th, 2007
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Just because Card claims to be a moderate, doesn’t mean he is. In particular, having read his writing on homosexuality (and his responses to the response to his writings), in some areas he is quite conservative.
Leaving aside his actual political leanings, I have to agree with the reviewers above. His work is much better when he leaves out the armchair political analysis and moralization. He may have nuanced and coherent political and moral opinions, but he doesn’t seem to be able to create such nuance in characters any more. It’s too bad, because in his early work, it was one of his definite strengths. Now a lot of his work is like reading Ayn Rand, only not as good: cartoon representations of different philosophies do battle, talk in diatribes, conquer all.
#28 by Person at October 16th, 2007
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Orson Scott Card is a registered Democrat.
#29 by Steve Sherman at December 1st, 2007
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Just because a fictitious storyline hurts your delicate political sensibilities doesn’t mean the book was intended to do so.
The point of the book is made at the very end (that would be the story that you didn’t read), and the political commentary is about the danger out there from the increasing divisive polarization that our country is facing. It is criticism of both the left and right, because a fully polarized polity means that thinking is out and irrational stupidity is in, and that environment makes it easier to be manipulated. Who were the real heroes in the story? Obviously you missed that point. Who was the real villan, the left? Obviously you missed the point. Ironically and sadly, many of the reviews here amplify and prove his point.
#30 by Marcus at December 7th, 2007
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I understand your point of view. I just finished the book today, and it was apparent that Card writes from a right-leaning perspective. But it wasn’t completely obvious during the reading, for he both insults and commends each side.
The development of the characters was much better than you seem to give him credit for. Reuben Malich is the “perfect” American, a great soldier who only desired to serve his country. But from the start, my favorite character was Torrent, before he became the main point of the book. His intellectual ramblings about Rome intrigued me from the start. And the way Card stopped the polarizations of bipartisanship by bringing in Torrent was simply satisfying.
You cannot read this book, from cover to cover, and disregard the development of the characters, the points he makes, and the idea he ultimately ends on.
Great book.
#31 by Eric Finley at February 20th, 2008
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Card is a registered democrat. He does try, in the Afterword, to claim neutrality. But the fact remains that in this so-called novel (which I did, to my regret, read - I kept hoping for the twist which would redeem it), it just so happens that…
- Right-wing heroes portray their perspectives clearly, somewhat rationally, and essentially sympathetically. Left-wing figures’ apparent motives and modes of thought are charicatures of how they think in the real world. He debates bodies versus cardboard standees, and the standees lose.
- Right-wing villains are either hamming it up for effect (General Acton) or misled. In no case do they bear true ill-will. Their actions are situationally justifiable even at their worst. Contrariwise, left-wing villains take ridiculous, despicable, premeditated and unprovoked actions on the flimsiest of pretexts, and are clearly fanatical about it (even their common footsoldiers take their own lives rather than be captured).
- Both sides are manipulated, yes. By whom? By a clearly left-leaning (look at actions and perspective, not the postpartisanship he professes), stereotyped, arrogant *college history professor* (!). The ‘resolution’ at the end of the book is no more than a second layer of slant to underpin the first layer of same. Torrent doesn’t redeem the horrors, he’s simply, baldly, and remorselessly culpable for them.
- Card insults the right, lightly, and follows it with retractions and ambiguiation. He insults the left repeatedly, vociferously, and no one returns a response. Witness Reuben’s “unanswerable” bon mot to faceless college lefties: “I would die for you.” Card asserts that they quite simply cannot give answer - somehow they are so shamed by this bald appeal to right-wing values (patriotism, courage, self-sacrifice) that not a one could possibly respond, “No thank you - I decline the offer” or “Lovely. I would innovate and create for you” or, simply, “Thanks! That’s your choice and I respect it. Now what about the point we were discussing?”
- In similar vein, the right receives fulsome praise both self-directed (the entirety of chapter two?) and external; nothing nearby detracts from it when this is the topic at hand. The left he quite literally damns with faint praise - commendations of such weak tea that the unwillingness to do more is its own clear assertion.
To call this book even-handed because it both criticizes and commends both sides is akin to asserting that a nail-clipper and a biological arsenal are both ‘dangerous.’ It’s a ridiculous mischaracterization.
It is a perfectly reasonable response for those on the left, whose beliefs Card so monstrously misrepresents, to feel maligned, and to point out these flaws in strong terms. This reaction to affront does not somehow magically make Card’s assertions of fanaticism accurate.
If that fanaticism were as portrayed, then Card’s thesis would make some sense, and it would be merely his flat characters and swiss-cheese plot which would detract from it. But it is plain to anyone left of Joe Lieberman that Card either does not remotely understand, or deliberately mischaracterizes without appeal, one of the two sides about which he is trying to make a point.
The point, therefore, like the book, fails completely.
#32 by Schultz at March 3rd, 2008
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Dude, you know you are supposed to read the book before slagging it….sheesh, why not just review the backcover blurb next time
#33 by Trottski at March 26th, 2008
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@ Eric Finley: I did, to my regret, read [it] - I kept hoping for the twist which would redeem it.
Ah, that’s what I was afraid of. I’ve never read a book by Card I didn’t like, so I expected something interesting and insightful from this one. Instead, after three chapters, I feel I’ve wandered into a very bad, very stupid comic book. Unable to believe it was really this bad, I went to the web to see if it might redeem itself. Apparently not. There are a million books out there and I can’t think of any reason to continue reading one that is clearly just crap. I’ll share my findings with my wife, who I expect will sell it back to whoever she bought it from.
#34 by Trottski at March 26th, 2008
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I mean, not to put too fine a point on it, I cannot believe any semi-competent writer would expect his audience to take him or his story seriously after opening the action by having the two main characters just happen to find themselves standing at exactly the right spot, at exactly the right time, to actually see a flotilla of submersibles sneaking up the Potomac — see it, that is, because one of the observers happens to be an expert sailor who can detect surface disturbances invisible to the lay eye. And these submersibles just happen to be carrying out an attack designed by one of these characters in what he thought was a counter-terrorist assignment. And the two characters just happen to get their hands on a couple of firearms and intervene in the plot just in time, but just happen to suffer an inexplicable lapse of professionalism so that both shoot the same target at the same time, leaving the other target to successfully complete the mission.
Honestly, to call it a comic book is to insult the great tradition of Stan Lee, et al. If the manuscript hadn’t said “by Orson Scott Card” on the cover, there isn’t a publisher on Earth who wouldn’t have laughed it out of the office.
Utter, utter garbage.